Angel of Death

I only read the first chapter but it seems like you have a good plot. You seem to switch POV's a lot which makes it seem like a play in ...

This was an interesting title. I didn't expect to be about a woman beginning a journey though. Is she trying to leave her old life behind? I hope you continue ...

You continue to capture the emotions and the story continues to become more and more interesting. Some of the things that I loved about this chapter was 1. The whole ...

Hmmm, another job well done. Your characters are branching out in personalities so its easy to tell them apart. The whole Mark persona is really a great touch to the ...

Experimental hmmm? *thinks for a second* I thought this was weird in a good sense. As always, I find myself pulled into your writing. The script-formation you used was different ...

Fortunately, the little kids decided that the lake was lame and hung out at the basketball court

Hey gyrfalcon!! I don't think I ever read any of your pieces and so I don't think you know me. *extends hand forward* I'm Angel of Death but you can ...

I really can't say which era I like best because from the 80s to today there was some really great music. I can't name any specifics right now but today. ...

Ok. Everyone said what I was thinking while I read this. But ummm. You really need to open up some books and start reading them. The way you wrote this...your ...

Another great chapter. I have no complaints as always, but I will point out some of the things I did like about this chapter. 1. The descriptions (as always) were ...

HA! HA! HA! Hey BBB! I haven't read any work from you in a while :( but I am so glad I read this. This was hilarious. I mean I ...

Bravo KJ!!! This next chapter was brilliant. Jeff? I would never in the days I started reading your story think Jeff and Genny were together. She hated Mark? You are ...

Hi KJ!! Ok this was really unexpected but its nice to know the character now has an exterior motive, something to strive for. I really liked the second paragraph. She ...

I really liked this chapter, mainly because you really got me thinking. Well anyways, the part where she's at Caribou Coffee is hilarious because he can't feel her hitting him. ...

I find it best to write when the city is asleep because then you don't have to worry about honking horns and loud voices. Sometimes, when it rains I just ...